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[OOC] New Avalon

Started by yamikuronue, Apr 03, 2018, 11:47 am

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CalamityJade

Waiting, though usually those connected or related to the Welcomed usually don't wait long. There's a lot of high society that tries all kinds of exposures to see if they can make their children Welcomed as fast as possible.

yamikuronue

So which should Lance be? I made him 19

CalamityJade

At that point, unless he was a prodigy or had some sort of interesting talent, I'd say he'd be waiting. Of course...that would probably put some pressure on him. There are some families that...suddenly lose members if there's fear they'd become Abandoned..

yamikuronue

Edited all three apps then https://what.thedailywtf.com/plugins/nodebb-plugin-emoji/emoji/emoji-one/1f642.png?v=735rlqkeesl" class="not-responsive emoji emoji-emoji-one emoji--slightly_smiling_face" title=":)" />

CalamityJade

So, I have a few ideas of the more fantastical/steampunk elements for the setting.

Setting Concept: The Pulse and The Path


The Pulse, that hum of the city that everyone can feel. It's what some believe draws all the people to New Avalon and why no one leaves. Some are simply privy to it's existence and that there's more as people gather. That charge from a good dance party, the calm waves that wash over you at music shows, that's the feel of the Pulse. Some go a bit farther and are able to do something with that energy. The way that lights shine a little brighter or dim a little lower during those soul-stirring musical numbers? That's probably because the performer(s) in question can use the Pulse to draw the listeners in and really connect with them. Others are the members of Cursader Industrial. They are the ones that draw the Sprawl to power the machines, lights, and everything else in New Avalon. Everything, from the street lamps and bright lights, to the towering factories in the Forge run off the Pulse.
The Path...that magical series of events that lead you to being Welcomed. Some believe they were born to find their path. Others believe that it's all luck. Even MORE believe that it's more of a  religion that separates the worthy from the condemned. And then there are those that believe they can see it. That they know how to find someone's Path and can lead them to being Welcomed...all they usually ask is a little monetary compensation for their assistance. Of course, they'll almost always ask up front, but hey. Sometimes you have to gamble a little to win.

yamikuronue

https://what.thedailywtf.com/uid/1727">@cloak15 said:
Sprawl

Dunno about this term. Love the concept, but the word feels weird in this context.

CalamityJade

I was going for something like the feel of the city, so there's a city sprawl, right?
Hmm...

yamikuronue

Yeah, but the urban sprawl is the bit of city that spreads out and out around the core bit of a city. To sprawl is to lay across something. You know?
Maybe "vibe"?

CalamityJade

Hmm...not sure if I like Vibe for the same reason I'm not keen on Beat. Feels...wrong for what I want.


CalamityJade

OOHH! Pulse is perfect!
Edit: And now it's canon ^_^

CalamityJade

Anyway, heading out for a bit to see a man about a power drill.

yamikuronue



   

   
      
         
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Hammer Sister

OK, had a think, and pooped out a bio. Maybe it's a bit too film noir? I've probably ticked about seven cliché boxes, what with the hat 'n' all... I wouldn't blame anyone who said '1930s Chicago' https://what.thedailywtf.com/plugins/nodebb-plugin-emoji/emoji/emoji-one/1f606.png?v=735rlqkeesl" class="not-responsive emoji emoji-emoji-one emoji--smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes" title=":laughing:" />

New Avalon Immigration & Registration Form
Name: Rob 'Mac' McCarthey
Age: 21
Concept: The Private Detective
Description: Black hair, blue eyes, skin tone the dark end of Caucasian (think Mediterranean). Normally wears smart-casual trousers, teamed with a shirt and jacket, but no tie. Sometimes also wears a trilby. Always carries a notebook and pen.
General info: Attracted by the promises of the big city, Rob (or Mac to his friends, of which he has few) moves to Avalon to pursue a career as a private detective. However, he's struggling to make it a success; so far, he's earning just about enough to live by, but until he builds a solid reputation, he'll be unable to rake in the big bucks.
Status: Waiting

Fun banal fact: I actually own a trilby, but it's a bit too small for me https://what.thedailywtf.com/plugins/nodebb-plugin-emoji/emoji/emoji-one/1f606.png?v=735rlqkeesl" class="not-responsive emoji emoji-emoji-one emoji--smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes" title=":laughing:" />
And then the murders began.

CalamityJade

Hey, looks fine to me. Figured someone would make a detective.

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